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What Writers are Saying...

"Jenna Harte did an edit of a 9,000 word short story that I submitted for consideration to an anthology. I am sure without her edits and critique, my short story wouldn't have been chosen to be included in the published anthology. Her insight and guidance were invaluable. Not only was she able to point out the basics, such as the overuse of specific words, she was able to help me write with more feeling rather than showing, which only enhanced the emotional vibe of each scene. I couldn’t have accomplished the polished, perfected version of my story without her assessment, revisions, and most importantly, her encouragement and support of me and my writing."  — A. Francoure

 

"Jenna was kind enough to look at my draft of 'Crimson Wake' before I sent it in to the first Tender and Tempting Tales Anthology, Moonlight and Margaritas. I've taught writing at the college level, so of course I wasn't looking for grammar help, but I have been in academic writing for a long time... and I didn't have a lot of experience with short stories or commercial romance, so I knew I needed her advice. Jenna did a very thorough developmental edit, helping me to think differently about the plot, the focus of the language, and the emotional content. She also helped me clean up dialogue tags, focus on body language, and make my language more active and appealing. Over the past year, exercising my short story writing muscles and going back over my stuff with Jenna's advice, I think I have improved immensely and begun to see much more publishing success. I have a PhD in English, and there was still a lot I could learn from Jenna. Send her your stuff!" —T.A. Leederman, Author

 

“You have a very valuable gift for seeing an MS in terms of how an average reader sees it...In almost every case, I made substantive changes to the text to address your excellent questions about this or that passage.” — M. Patrick, Romance Author

 

“I am loving your comments and learning a lot! Have felt a lot of gratitude for the instruction around showing not telling” — S. Brown, Aspiring Author

Details

Who Am I?

I'm Jenna Harte, and along with reading romance, I've written over a dozen romances, and ghostwritten nearly 90 romance novels. I understand what readers want and can help you develop your story to deliver the excitement and emotion they crave.

I've edited romances as an agent, and I sold every one my clients' stories once they were edited and sent out on submission to editors. I’ve also had authors reach out to hire me to do submission (chapters, synopsis, and query) package review and edits.

I own and manage WritewithHarte.com, an online romance community that supports romance authors by providing information and resources to help them write, publish, and market romance fiction. 

What do you get?

• Developmental edit on the first 3 chapters (up to 10,000) words that includes in-document edits and comments (using Word Track Changes or Google Docs Editing). 
• One-page summary of what is working and suggestions to improve the story as you edit beyond the first 3 chapters. 
• Delivery of your edits and report 10 to 14 days after received.
• 30-Days of email support following the delivery of your report. 

If you have any trouble making your order or receiving the onboarding email, please contact me here. 

Terms: Your purchase of Next Draft Review enters you into an agreement with Jenna Harte of Write with Harte for the services listed above under the terms described. As part of the agreement, you will follow the instructions for delivering your chapters provided in the email receipt, and send them in a timely manner--within 7 days. Instructions for manuscript delivery include formatting guidelines and how to send the MS either as an attachment or link to shared Google Doc.

Jenna Harte will provide a professional review of your submission with edits, comments, and summary; however, she cannot guarantee you will achieve any specific results such as acceptance to a publication as she has no control over if and how you use her suggestions, who you're submitting to, or quality of writing and story execution. 

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